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| Author: | Supermj [ Fri Jul 18, 2008 1:29 am ] |
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I figure I should comment on it here, and all I really can say is: It's sad  very, very sad. Though it's well written nature will make you want to finish it, it winds up with no dramatic solution. Unless you were to make a second one where he miraculously survives. Though chances are you won't, seeing as you made sure no firemen were under him saving his fall. Good job playing god in an imaginary world! |
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| Author: | Nova [ Mon Jul 28, 2008 12:36 am ] |
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Well, I couldn't think of anything, and the song inspired me to write it. And letting him live at the end is a little cliche (no offense). I wrote this just to write something and i promise that my next story will be WAY more cheerful 
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| Author: | LIDIA=LUI [ Tue Aug 26, 2008 4:22 am ] |
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you actually posted this... whooo~~~ so emo, duude. |
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| Author: | Samuel [ Tue Aug 26, 2008 8:55 pm ] |
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so late dude... |
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