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吴羿翔
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Post subject: Amazing  Posted: Sun Jul 06, 2008 3:43 am |
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Wow, LIDIA=LUI! your poems are so... enthralling (is that the right word?). They're quite beautiful. I really believe your poems could become quite popular if you decide on becoming a poet for a career.
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awexomeandy
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Post subject: Posted: Sun Jul 06, 2008 9:13 am |
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I agree completly with 5
Its supercalifragalisticexpiallidotiosly good!
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casade1
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Post subject: Posted: Sat Aug 02, 2008 12:59 am |
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Not to burst your bubble or anything(I'm hypercritical), but your poems could be better if you somehow managed to fit everything to a beat. Other than that, your could be giving people like J.K. Rowling a run for their money.
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吴羿翔
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Post subject: Posted: Sat Aug 02, 2008 2:35 am |
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Not all poems need a beat, Jack.
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Post subject: Posted: Tue Aug 05, 2008 2:14 pm |
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It would be better if it had one. Just saying.
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LIDIA=LUI
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Post subject: I can't believe you read these stuff... jkjk. (kinda true..) Posted: Wed Aug 06, 2008 9:51 pm |
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wow... thank you for all the nice comments... i do this for fun. ^^ and I quite like it. sorry I couldn't reply earlier I didn't check this site much since I have nothing to really post yet... yea. hahaha. and reading this poem, you may think that I've really gone through life craps and mature and thinks a lot but no i don't and you know it if you know me enough. I LOATHE THINKING!!! muahahahaha. sorry I don't even know why I'm talking like this or about this. sorry i must be bored... rofl. but yea thank you!!! well, you guys are very talented, too. ^^ cyaa
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